We are about to announce the MVP of the 2021-22 season and the winner is….. the crowd starts to talk like why did he just stop talking. What is happening the main guy has a meeting with his other guys and they discuss it and then the guy comes back to the microphone and says “We are having some slight difficulties.” The crowd then starts chanting cheaters, cheaters and the security has to come in and stop that and also has to take some people out. I was supposed to win I also had the best odds to win. UGH!
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Hi Owen, I like how you set up the anticipation in your story. It is very engaging and the twist of having something go wrong encourages the reader to keep reading. Well done.